Today we are going to talk about three photos. I am going to describe each of them so you can get a picture in your mind of them.
Selfie number 1
Everyone gathered around and did a pose. The men were all pushing each other to get in the photo. The man in the middle took out his cellphone. At that moment everyone started doing poses and acted happy. He went onto the camera frame and everyone started freaking out. His thumb went closer to the take a photo button and soon everyone was acting normal and smiling. He took a photo and just before that someone put their hand in front of the phone. They took a photo as a group.
Selfie number 2
My hand lifted into the air. I felt free and never looked down. My heart was pumping. I was so high in the air because I climbed a statue. My legs were shaking. A smile went upon face. I was nervous but I still loved it up in the air. My eyes barley opened but they were slightly open.
Selfie number 3
She climbed up a wall and started posing, then pulled out her phone from her pocket and started taking selfies. She stood on a beautiful landscape of a city, on the edge of some platform high in the air. Her jacket was tied to her waist. If she were to fall she would of fell in the ocean. Beneath her was an ocean of vibrant blue. When she took the selfie she was balancing. Her mouth had a smile. One of her arms were leaning toward the edge of the platform.
Kia Orana Vitaraag,
ReplyDeleteYou have written some descriptive little stories about each of the pictures that were provided. I like the way you described what each of the people could see, smell, feel and what you thought they might've been thinking. You have used lots of adjectives to describe each scenario, ka pai. :)
Perhaps next time you could write about how the man in the picture felt just as he snapped the picture standing on the edge of that statue. Think about what might've been going through his mind in that moment...
I probably wouldn't take a selfie the way he did because I wouldn't want to end up falling to my death over that edge! No thank you! I shall stick to regular selfies.
Would you take a risky selfie like the man in the picture?
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.