Today I am going to share some writing about how to turn your teacher into a toad. The things I was trying to achieve were using specific verbs, use different sentence starters and make sure my writing makes sense.
Here is my writing
How to turn your teacher into a toad!
Has your teacher been giving you extra homework well your in for luck!
Today I am going to show you how to turn your teacher into a toad.
Today I am going to show you how to turn your teacher into a toad.
You will need:
- Vampire teeth
- 2 Gallons of seawater
- One blade
- One toad
- 5 crocodile teeth
- One human brain
- A cauldron
Method:
- Take the cauldron and lite it up
- Pour the seawater in the cauldron
- Cut the toad into quarters
- Fling the toad pieces into the cauldron
- Flick the crocodile teeth into the cauldron
- Slice the brain in sixths
- Toss the brain pieces in the cauldron and mix with the blade
Wait for a night and when you will see it’s reflection and it is toad then your potion is ready!
Sneak into class really early in the morning and fill their bottle with the mixture and wait.
When they drink it a gust of smoke will appear then they will turn into a green toad forever!
Sneak into class really early in the morning and fill their bottle with the mixture and wait.
When they drink it a gust of smoke will appear then they will turn into a green toad forever!
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