Hello bloggers,
A few weeks ago we tried out some VR headsets. Now we are trying to convince our
principle to buy some for our school. Here is my persuasive writing.
principle to buy some for our school. Here is my persuasive writing.
I think that you should buy some VR headsets for the school. Firstly, it is fun, secondly,
the teachers don’t have to plan as much and thirdly it gives us amazing opportunities .
So today I am going to convince you to buy a couple VR headsets.
the teachers don’t have to plan as much and thirdly it gives us amazing opportunities .
So today I am going to convince you to buy a couple VR headsets.
Firstly it is fun. Most people in the school will probably love the VR headsets. Like me. For
example,
if the teacher plans something that some students hate, doing it in VR would make it fun
for them. If the class didn’t do it in VR and they hate the subject they wouldn’t try their
hardest and wouldn’t pay attention. It could take a long time for a teacher to sort that out
but in VR they probably would pay attention. Another example is that it could be a fun game
for students if they have been good. It would never get boring.
example,
if the teacher plans something that some students hate, doing it in VR would make it fun
for them. If the class didn’t do it in VR and they hate the subject they wouldn’t try their
hardest and wouldn’t pay attention. It could take a long time for a teacher to sort that out
but in VR they probably would pay attention. Another example is that it could be a fun game
for students if they have been good. It would never get boring.
Secondly it would make the teachers plan less. The students would choose what they learn
about rather than the teacher. For example, if the teachers have run out of ideas then
they would get stressed out and lots of bad things will happen. If we have the VR headsets
she could say to describe something that we saw in VR. But it wouldn’t be an ordinary piece
of writing. Since things in VR are really realistic you can see every detail which will make
student’s writing easier because they can see the little detail you normally wouldn’t see
other than trying to think of what a shark's eye looks like. It’s like a two in one, the
teachers plan less and the students get better writing.
about rather than the teacher. For example, if the teachers have run out of ideas then
they would get stressed out and lots of bad things will happen. If we have the VR headsets
she could say to describe something that we saw in VR. But it wouldn’t be an ordinary piece
of writing. Since things in VR are really realistic you can see every detail which will make
student’s writing easier because they can see the little detail you normally wouldn’t see
other than trying to think of what a shark's eye looks like. It’s like a two in one, the
teachers plan less and the students get better writing.
Thirdly, it can give us experiences that we would never get to do. For example, we
could go to a different country. I am 99 percent sure that our school would never
take students to a different country. Another example is that you don’t have to
organize everything to go to the real place. We could just go there in VR and it would
be much easier.
could go to a different country. I am 99 percent sure that our school would never
take students to a different country. Another example is that you don’t have to
organize everything to go to the real place. We could just go there in VR and it would
be much easier.
Please buy VR headsets because it will make the whole school happy. It is an easy and
fun way for us to learn. We would appreciate if you bought some.
fun way for us to learn. We would appreciate if you bought some.
I hope you enjoyed my blog post. If you have any feedback please comment on it.
Do you think our principal should buy us VR headsets? BYE!!
Do you think our principal should buy us VR headsets? BYE!!
Hello Vitaraag,
ReplyDeleteI like the second sentence because I know that's true. Did you think about how you posted your blog post? Next time you could use CTRL+SHIFT V instead of just using CTRL+V.
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ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava Vitaraag
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading the reasons you wrote to try convinced Ms Campbell(Principle).I liked the way how you said VR headsets will make the whole school happy.How much do you love the VR headsets?