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Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Persuasive writing to Mrs butler

Hello bloggers,
We wrote persuasive letters to Mrs butler because we wanted her to bring her dog (Jess) to come into our class. We finished them and sent them to Mrs Butler. Then she actually brought Jess in.
Here is my Persuasive letter,

Dear Mrs Butler,

Thank you for visiting our class and telling us about your best friend Jess. I think she must be an astonishing companion. I really relish the chance to see her. The way you described her makes me surprised to hear about such a delightful dog. I am sure that it will be a fantastic time with you and Jess.

I think Jess would cope well because you described her in a really nice way. She is really tolerant so if everyone runs and pats her she will work with it.

We promise we will be respect Jess and not be silly with her. We all will love her so much and want to see her in person. If you brought her it would be fun for everyone in the school.

We are all going to be excited when Jess comes . But we all know that it is your choice. Please bring Jess.

Yours sincerely,

Vitaraag

If you had a dog would this persuade you? Thanks for checking out my blog. If you have any feedback please tell me. Make sure you check my blog every once in a while to be updated on what I have been doing. BYE!!

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