For literacy we were writing a description about a book called Where the Wild Things are by Maurice Sendak. Miss Percy gave us several wild things to choose. Once we picked one we write a description about it. Our goal was to use descriptive nouns and verbs (interesting vocabulary) and to vary my sentence beginners.
Here is my writing
As the wild things swing through the treetops they stare with their devil eyes. My wild thing has horns like a devil. His hair is like moss sagging down. He has lobster like claws. His brutal nails are really harsh. His nostrils are as dark as a ghoulish cave. His body is as big as a boulder and can camouflage in a gloomy environment. As you stare into this mysterious creature it is like a bowling ball trying to squash you. The wild things gaze at you with an alarming look.
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| This was drawn by Maurice Sendak. |
Namaste Vitaraag,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your description about your wild thing. It is very evident that you have deliberately chosen some interesting vocabulary - I particularly like the words brutal, sagging and ghoulish. Your next step would be start your sentences in different ways. Based on your description, I think you have chosen the second wild thing from the right - is this correct?
Hi iam Dwaraka Vitaraag I really like your monster story it is interesting.Yuor montessori help me a lot in writing and I like your story.I think you should do a report about animals.
ReplyDeleteIt does remind me of monkeys Swinging around a tree.