Last Friday we went to Lynfield College for a marae visit I did some writing about it. Can you please give me some feedback?
Marae trip to Lynfield College
Last Friday we went to Lynfield College for a marae visit because it was
matariki. When we arrived there we entered Lynfield College.
matariki. When we arrived there we entered Lynfield College.
We walked past class windows and I could hear people cheering and getting
distracted from their work because we were walking noisily to the marae.
distracted from their work because we were walking noisily to the marae.
When we were entering the marae some students from Lynfield College were
performing a powhiri as we were walking into the marae. I liked when we
learned the haka. I liked it because now I know multiple hakas and it was a
completely different haka to the other one I had learned.
performing a powhiri as we were walking into the marae. I liked when we
learned the haka. I liked it because now I know multiple hakas and it was a
completely different haka to the other one I had learned.
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Can you please give me feedback on my writing. Bye!!
check out the updated version of what I have been doing.
Can you please give me feedback on my writing. Bye!!
Dear Vitaraag!
ReplyDeleteWe really liked and enjoyed your blog post about your visit in Lynfield College we enjoyed reading your blog post. The words you have put on your blogpost was really good. We liked how you said about what Lynfield College taught you guys. Maybe one day we can go there myself and maybe you could tell me more from what you learnt in Lynfield College in your free time. Can you tell me what more you learnt?
From Adrian and Eshaan!